So the story was alright--it moved. At certain moments I felt that it was trying too hard--like the "the jokes are coming" references. I thought it was unnecessary and there weren't any actual jokes. It just came off as--please, please like me.
I wasn't to keen on the art.
As for the sex, the writer doesn't really understand how women's organisms work. And typically it isn't easy to get to the first time. So, I felt that his description was superficial.
I did find the glowing penis amusing at the end.
Ouch! The "please, please like me" comment is going to set Matt Fraction's therapy back a bit.
We had a little discussion about why I liked the art and I pointed out that I read a lot of comics for these reviews and it's very refreshing given so many other series have art this is more about action than human interaction. Plus I think the colors are nice.
We need more feed-back from Erica. And all of you. Feel free to send your comments in and we'll be happy to give you shouts outs.